staplestoo

wild I would type more but I cant stop laughing

God I can't believe it took me seventeen days, eight months, and thirty-two hours to review this. Sorry. Anyway, this was better. I liked some of the wicked exciting descriptions, ...

Huh. Well, I'll start by saying your writing is surprisingly good. Punctuation and grammar were both almost spotless, and the only thing that annoyed me technicality-wise would be vocab. There ...

For all I know, this is a good story. But the punctuation is so atrocious I can't read it. EX. OF HOW TO USE COMMAS: "Hey, Jack," said Sarah, her ...

I can't say that I like your name. But let's focus on the story. I was bored. I was so bored I threw up all over the world. But you ...

Um...this is fictional, right? That last review was pretty worthless. But a thirteen year old girl shouldn't be reading this stuff anyway. Rate it R. I don't like nit-picking, but ...

What you just posted here = blog material. Especially with the lack of punctuation and grammar. It's sad that you like Abercrombie. But, besides that, don't be a punk or ...

It's gory up there. ()()()()()()()()()()() It knew it was hopeless to try and explain to Doncaster why I had just asked her out with a pile of shit, but, just ...

Yeah, okay? Earlier than I thought. ()()()()()()()()() As I contemplated turning around to see this ‘female god’, I tried to remember if God was very hot. I remembered Jesus being ...

I'm attractive. I'm the first picture, by the way. The second one is the little mermaid trying to look like me.

Woah. You need to take this off right now before you get banned. It's practically chatspeak. Learn how to capitalize and punctuate before posting on a writers website. Please. Once ...

Gotta keep it going. ()()()()()()()()()()() As is commonly accepted among figures of little importance, really weird things that end with you waking up on the floor, are probably dreams. Now, ...

Huh. This was a little strange. Probably the main thing I would suggest would be character stuff. If the characters aren't odd or interesting, the plot isn't going to matter. ...

I'm annoyed at the title. I refuse to read stories that don't have titles. If you don't have a good enough imagination to grab something arbitrary out of the sky, ...

Damn, this was pretty weird but I liked it. There were a few grammar sort of errors but I hate nit-picking so I won't bother. I liked how stupid Frankie ...