stagnanturanium

I enjoyed reading this poem. But your allusions are out of my reach. Now, don't laugh, but were you writing about reading these stories? Or were you just referencing them? ...

Yes. I loved what you wrote. So simple and true. Everything that happened in this poem was out of your (the narrator's?) control. Maybe it wasn't the intention, but from ...

thanks. but, and i'm sorry for the misunderstanding, the sun was actually rising as a typed. That wasn't actually part of the poem, it was a little introduction I probably ...

The Spiritual Assassination of George H.W. Bush Part One: The Murder Former President George W. Bush had an idea where this was going. “This is going nowhere,” he firmly stated. ...

Hey all.. I am not experienced in writing poetry. But I read some poems by Philip Larkin and was inspired to see how I'd fare on my own. I don't ...

The Spiritual Assassination of George H.W. Bush Part One: The Murder Former President George W. Bush had an idea where this was going. “This is going nowhere,” he firmly stated. ...

Oh this disease, This terrible disease! I’m so difficult to please, Yet so easily diseased! I woke for work, All dressed and perk, When all of a sudden I feigned ...

Here's something I made for fun, not a poet, just saw someone sleeping and...well, here it is. A man is sleeping in the corner… A man is sleeping in the ...

Pozoe 12, I began to read your story, and saw a competency in diction most my age can't reach, and a natural storyteller's fluidity that is unteachable. The way you ...

Hey, I liked your poem, especially that nice twist at the end. I just have a few grammatical suggestions: "But strong of pride she held." "strong of" sounds strange, possibly ...

Revised, free verse. First time I have ever tried this form of poetry. I was pretty confused, but I'll make it through this tumultuous beginning... like a rookie takes the ...

He stands in line for his shirt to dry Sporting a hangover’s distinctive stench. When the man behind drops a coin and whines The man buttons the shirt, fists strongly ...

I think that you could have gone without an omniscient narrator. It feels as though this model is writing in her diary, not that a poet is taking her diary ...

I'm no poet, but I'll just write my initial impressions of the piece. I like the presentation of a short sighted desire for affection (Just for Today) put alongside the ...