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this is good. i'm really interested in this. your main character has a past, and i want to know what it was. however, there were some grammatical errors such as: ...

Tori- so this is really good, right? Right. So, down to business. This portion of the story is really intriguing and made me want to read more. Also the last ...

To start off: This is hilarious! Also, you pretty much nailed all of the characters' personalities. Oh noez! I am a beautifully sexy man-whore for being attracted to you in ...

Tori- This is really good. I didn't know you wrote poetry... I like the fact that you kept repeated "Emerald Eyes" it made it sound...more poetic. However, i am concerned. ...