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Thanks Nathalie, and Allmixedup! This is one of my first attempts at poetry, and I'm glad for the feedback. :) Camryn

I am trapped in my own head, My mind like prison walls. The barbed wire memories retain me. And everyone else, like security cameras. Making sure I don’t escape. The ...

Hey you guys! Thanks for all the helpful review! Snoink, about the part with the man with red eyes, he has red eyes because he's an albino...sorry if i was ...

I started to gasp, but then decided that would be unwise, so I tried to disguise it into a sneeze. He seemed to believe it. He also looked impatient. I ...

this is good. i'm really interested in this. your main character has a past, and i want to know what it was. however, there were some grammatical errors such as: ...

My story starts the day the prince from Sparta came to our city to court me. That day I woke up unusually early. The sun was still in the eastern ...

I never thought that I would be queen. In fact, it never once crossed my mind. Besides the fact that I am a girl, I am also the youngest in ...

Tori- so this is really good, right? Right. So, down to business. This portion of the story is really intriguing and made me want to read more. Also the last ...

To start off: This is hilarious! Also, you pretty much nailed all of the characters' personalities. Oh noez! I am a beautifully sexy man-whore for being attracted to you in ...

Tori- This is really good. I didn't know you wrote poetry... I like the fact that you kept repeated "Emerald Eyes" it made it sound...more poetic. However, i am concerned. ...

Hi Everybody! It's Camryn...i'm new to this website...well thats kinda yeah. :D Im from America and i like to read, write, play tennis and sleep...so, yes that's it...Bye :lol:

Tori- sorry, like half of the errors are bad on my part...whoops..should have been more careful when yeah...er...keep up the good work...