spyritsentry

The idea was interesting and it was well put together. I found it a bit quick but that is probably because you haven't gotten to the full story yet. I ...

HAHAHA this is freaking great. I know EXACTLY what this feels like (I think most do). This writing is creative and something I don't think most people could come up ...

This is a remarkable story. I want to hear more, were does the story go from here. I didn't notice any of the mistakes i was to busy focusing on ...

I loved the intro. The scene is amazingly clear and epic. I'm guessing this isn't a literal warrior and the true story is a girl faceing the darkness in her ...

It was an interesting story. I enjoyed reading it. THe spelling mistakes were simple and I don't focus much on them (plus to me they don't bother the story that ...

Great poem. I see this in the eyes of my fellow friends everyday. They deserve better you obviously understand. This work got my mind going. I will make sure that ...

Great poem! The emotion his carved in extremely well to the point wear I have never felt this way but can now understand a little more. The flow was wonderful. ...

I am an abomination, I am a killer. I don't understand why I'm this way I just have to kill, and kill. The urges don't stop even as I watch ...

Very nice. This is a good start. I am not one for changing what is in the story unless the person asked so I won't give you any of that. ...

The bell rings and the match starts. The guy I'm fighting is massive, 130 pounds. Against me barely reaching 120. He was undefeated with 18 wins. I had one loss ...

This is a very good poem. Have you every realy felt like that cause I have and it is not a good feeling. Good job with meaning and emotion. Not ...

wonderful peom. I loved the word chose and the meaning the most. This is the best poem I have read so far and I have read alot. The talet you ...

Friggin awsome poem. I like happy poems. This one is about beauty and how you marvole something. Very nice world choice. You are added to my fallow list.

Very nice poem and I think you should do what you think is right. If you think it should be longer then make it longer. If you think it should ...

it was a nice poem i saw nothing wrong with it. I would actualy liked it more if it was longer, but it was deep.