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This is what the goddess Mooneye looks like:

Thank you very much, I will be fixing the Human no more line soon, Please check out my other work!

Technically "Bitch" means female dog...and people just refere to women as that.

Oopps so sorry for the double post, my internet is acting up!

That's really sweet, exept for a typo or two, but it's to heart felt for my to critique.

That's really sweet, exept for a typo or two, but it's to heart felt for my to critique.

Lol. thanks. The next chapter should be up tomorrow! And if anybody has any suggestions, or wants to name one of the future horse characters, please pm me!

This is what Rebel Yell looks like(he is the foal in front...):

This is what Acapella looks like:

This is what the stallion Nightmare is fighting looks like:

Yeah, the wolf is my fav animal, but I pretty much like every animal.

Nightmare looks similar to this:

I think your story was very good, except for a few things here and there but people have already critiqued on those.

Sure Kim, I will add you as a friend :)

I"m writing the first chapter for this story, this was just the prologue sort of...