spiritblackwolf2705

Hmm. It was pretty good. I could alomst feel what you were feeling when you wrote it. But the rhyming was a bit confusing. You would rhyme every other line, ...

Wow, It's very good. You did a great job with the rhyming, except for line 5 and 6, they don't rhyme. But overall, still a very very nice poem. Keep ...

Hmm, I agree. It would be better as a story, few peoms have dialouge in them. So, try converting it to a story, it would be a lot better. Not ...

Hello, Kelsey! Welcome to YWS. PM if you need someone to talk too. Anyways, See you around! ~Spirit

Welcome to the Young Writers Society! I'm sure you will have a great time here. ~Spirit

Welcome to YWS Baylee. Hope you have a great time here. :) ~Spirit

Great story. I love it when characters black out and appear somewhere else, it gives stories a sense of mystery. You rarely find stories about werecats, you mostly find werewolves, ...

Thanks.

Oh, and to answer anyones questions before they ask them. 1. I look older than I am. but I'm only 13. 2. Yes, I have my nose pierced, you can ...

Okay, but they are both of me.

Or picture 2? Picture 2:

Okay, I have two pictures of myself. I need an opinion on which one is better. Picture 1:

Okay, thanks.

I Like 2 and 7 the best! Great work.

I took this picture of my dog, Rocky: