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wow that was cool very interesting like a professional peice but am not sure its science fiction more like fantasy but damn cool cant wait to read the other stories.

NOTE : Mahatma here means mahatma gandhi. Seven months after January, It's freedom India got. One year after that, The mahatma was shot. He was a paramatama (wid a pure ...

well I am writing abt two teenagers who got transported into the future. Then they try to save the world. the ending's quite tragic.

well sorry abt this line And proposed you in written it shouldve been 'proposed to you in written'

Well it was good. but- Resonating from within the four walls, as they became her tomb. i think you suld write these lines separately. otherwise it was great.

Here we met, The sun had already set. The air was romantic, and you were fantastic. I fell in love with you, Like two beautiful doves do. I gifted you ...

It was a nice poem. And it was quite wonderful that with such a gruel barbaric,evil,sickening etc. a poem can look so beautiful. keep it up.

well It had a lot of wit and watever it was great though there was no sense of this play it was good for timepass.

I dont know what to say actually If you wanted to write a funny play then improve this one cause its kinda confusing. ANd if not then I dont know ...

"A fool they said. A fool they meant." well to be honest I made this line to build a flow, a rythm in the poem. I also dont know if ...

Part 1 - Scene1 CHARACTERS- The Unknown Narrator- The night was cold and was a full moon night but the moon had hid under the cover of the clouds. a ...

Thunder roared, Eagles soared. Heaven above, Hell Below. All laughed at me. A fool they said. A fool they meant. They were right. Who would give his life for the ...

Part 1 - Scene1 CHARACTERS - The Unknown Narrator- The night was cold and was a full moon night but the moon had hid under the cover of the clouds. ...

was it a poem? didnt seem so but nonetheless it was good and captivating. the flow between two paragraphs werent good. fix the flow bet. them otherwise it was a ...

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