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ok thanks for all your reviews I was waiting for them all day long. and yes aghast was indeed used incorrectly. so I edited it. Thnx watervyper. And about the ...

Kalyug The skies darken, As the sun dies. Up in the heavens, The angels cry. The earth burns, In the flames of hell. This day would come, Who could tell? ...

Ok normally I dont write these type of things but One of my friends challenged me that I cant write these type of things. So I proved it she was ...

"Spread your wings And you can fly. You’ll never know Unless you try. All you need Is the ability to trust. And don’t forget A bit of pixie dust! Close ...

y isnt anybody writing any comment is it so bad??I dont think so. maybe u all are it so?? Then please dont be I need to know how my poem ...

A Vampire's Touch The Sun shined so very very bright, It's rays provided such a beautiful sight. We sat on a cliff, Which overlooked the sea. The waves danced with ...

Oh god, I wannna go back to Earth. For I wanna wipe away the tears, From the eyes of little children. Oh god I wanna go back to Earth. For ...

i wrote it for my best frnd who was like my sister she is now in canada n am in india

loneliness games,laughter and joy all of them i hav, but i am alone. frnds both girls and boys i hav, but i still mourn. a strange emptiness is making my ...

hi guys never had so many replies for a poem. thnx guys and i cant decide if u all like it or not cause some of them say my poems ...

What is love? What is life? Life is sun, And love it's light. True love is heaven, And in it lovers reside. And without love, there is no life. Maybe ...

hey guys plz edit it cauze i think it needs it.and i desperately need ur suggestion dnt forget to check out its prologue and tell me if this ones's better ...

AN EXTRAORDINARY TEENAGE STORY PROLOGUE THE PREDICTION The night was dark and moonless.Clouds crowded the sky.Down in the forest a trail of several men were marching towards a common destination.They ...

A feeling inside me swirls, Making me sing this song. It makes me feel that here I dont belong. Instead I feel that, I belong somewhere else. Where there will ...

well it was good and needs no editing gud job and u chose a great topic to write abt too.