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And I like what you wrote, though I wouldn't say that it was 'flawless'. But I focus more on the idea and jest of stories and I liked what you ...

Oh well forget the criticisms. You said that you couldn't get it out of your head, so just work on it and continue writing. Just get the idea out of ...

Hey black bird thanks for the review! I have edited my poem but I haven't rhymed the last two lines as to me they are OK. And about those glittery ...

Flight Towards Freedom By Lord SvaTantra Fear, rejection and silent screams; they seek approval and freedom dreams. Mask, diamonds and fancy dress; their soul chokes under the glittery mess. Joy, ...

This is really nice you should continue writing. Definitely. I want to read more! Please!

This is really one of the best sketches I have seen in my life, the sheer complexity of this thing is amazing, plus the detailing makes it just perfect. Personally ...

Hi I rewrote the first chapter of 'the heart of a god' the novel has also been renamed to 'the shades of the heart' Please read it and compare the ...

I am re-writing my novel 'The heart of the god' and I have also renamed it into 'The shades of the heart'. The two chapters that I had posted of ...

They are super cool and deep too.Nice

This is simply awesome, rarely see something so beautiful nowadays.

Note from author : This is the same story as 'the heart of a god'. I rewrote the story as the previous format wasn't working for me. Now each chapter ...

Hello everybody! I am not new here, but never bothered to tell you guys about me (I am horribly lazy!). I was born in New Delhi, India ; And I ...

Hey this was as nice as it was before. The girl really has a dark past which disturbs me very much (that is a good thing!). But I am sorry ...

I really liked this. And I am the first one in YWS to like and comment on it. Though I would like to say that the girl's story was quite ...

And by the way emo people have very cool hairstyles (I am not emo though :( )