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Spidey here. Historical fiction. I love history but since it's sumemr i'm a little rusty. Correct me if i'm wrong, world war II was over by 1945. Entry III – ...

Spiderman here. Wow, an unhappily ever after. The whole theme of this poem was pretty amazing. He drinks and he cheats beats you every night. You might want to add ...

Spidey Here! I don't see anything wrong with the front. I love this whole piece. There is emotion and action at the same time. The plot of the story sounds ...

Please and thank you!

PLEASE AND THANK YOU!

Spiderman here. I'm not the grammar police, so i'll skip straight to the story. One shoplifting and a raid of some person's freezer later, we're dressed in dryed clothes and ...

I would like to thank all of you so very much for reviewing this. IT means ALOT to me. I have tooken all of your suggestions into consideration and will ...

Spidey here. I'm not the grammar police, so i'll leave that to the others. Since I was eight, I've been hunted. I don't know why, or who, or how. But ...

Done. Were open again. :smt001

Spidey here, and I'm a tad bit late. The poem was good. It told a story on a hard subject with good imagery and good flow. People already covered the ...

I would really appreciate if you read this. its short!

I was either 2 minutes away from being a dead man or 2 minutes away from being a free man. But death or freedom didn’t matter to me now. It ...

Spidey Here. Before I say my overall thoughts, i'm going to nitpick. The African man was standing against the warm bark of the tree in the heart of the African ...

I like this piece and want to see more. Yes, it was overly descriptive at one point but it was great at others. I agree with wolfgirl13 about suddenly. It's ...

I'm going to start off with a nitpick. I'm not a grammer freak. However, it still bugs me when people don't ident each paragraph. One more nitpick. Is the 2nd ...