specsbroodking

You had a very good idea in mind when you wrote this, I believe. And, before I go review this, let me say, for not being able to speak English ...

To put it simply, that was amazing. I wish more people had your talents. I couldn't help but feel for Mathew, and it made me feel horrible, as I'm sure ...

Very nice story. The way you describe the setting and move back and forth between present and past is nearly flawless. I could do grammar nitpicking, but I have to ...

This is a really good story. I love the imagery that you used. I could say that your sentences should be longer, but I like that you can be quick ...