specsbroodking

Thanks to all the responses. I wasn't exactly meaning for this to turn into an RPG storybook, but come what may. The first post should be up soon, as I ...

As you may have guessed, I don't have a title for the story yet, but I have some ideas for the plot and main characters (this will be a standard ...

Only a week had passed since Shawn had been betrayed by Katherine and the desert family. Here, in Tokyo, Shawn had managed to stay relatively underground. He hadn't seen or ...

Shawn had been walking for hours. The sun was beating down on him, and it didn’t help that the sun that didn’t hit him was being reflected off the sand. ...

You had a very good idea in mind when you wrote this, I believe. And, before I go review this, let me say, for not being able to speak English ...

To put it simply, that was amazing. I wish more people had your talents. I couldn't help but feel for Mathew, and it made me feel horrible, as I'm sure ...

Very nice story. The way you describe the setting and move back and forth between present and past is nearly flawless. I could do grammar nitpicking, but I have to ...

First of all, I want to thank everyone who has bothered to even look at my story. Unfortunately, I may not be posting any more chapters here for a while. ...

It had been two months since Shawn had been captured and forced into submission by the ruthless organization he now knew as KATANA. Now he sat meditating on past events. ...

This is a really good story. I love the imagery that you used. I could say that your sentences should be longer, but I like that you can be quick ...

Shawn woke up with a throbbing pain in his forehead and to the sound of a rumbling engine and wheels scraping against rough sand. As his eyes adjusted to the ...

Shawn was worried. Why? He had a date. Sure he'd had dates before, but this was the one date that would seal the deal. He and his girlfriend, Katherine, had ...