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Re: Revenge
Thanks everyone! I actually got the idea from the theme generator. This is was the original theme I was given: "Your story is about a secretary in a doctor's office ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Exposed Chapter 1
This has promise to it :) The only thing I'm not too sure about is the ending, it was rather flat. Can't wait to read more! -Sarah
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Pokemon with Adrian
I really like this, it's a nice idea, but i agree with MilkNCookies, you never mentioned the girls name. Also, I would have liked to see you go more in-dept ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Dearly Beloved
This is amazing! I loved the description of the wife- I thought it was strange, but it never made me think she was dead. I also loved the insanity of ...
Jun 27, 2011
