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speakingofsarah

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Revenge

    Thanks everyone! I actually got the idea from the theme generator. This is was the original theme I was given: "Your story is about a secretary in a doctor's office ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Exposed Chapter 1

    This has promise to it :) The only thing I'm not too sure about is the ending, it was rather flat. Can't wait to read more! -Sarah

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Pokemon with Adrian

    I really like this, it's a nice idea, but i agree with MilkNCookies, you never mentioned the girls name. Also, I would have liked to see you go more in-dept ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dearly Beloved

    This is amazing! I loved the description of the wife- I thought it was strange, but it never made me think she was dead. I also loved the insanity of ...

    Jun 27, 2011


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