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Re: Sometimes when I miss you
This is beautiful, you have such talent! "you whispered of your abandoned innocence" is probably my favorite line, but I don't have any corrections. You can almost hear the needing ...
Dec 28, 2012 -
Re: Exacted Revenge--Contest Entry
"EXACTED REVENGE Your story is about an artist trapped in a locker borrowing a pencil. Nigel sighed. It sounded strange as the sound echoed off the sides of the tiny ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: I Can't Win
Awhhh :( is this about your parents? I liked this a lot. Keep your head up :) -Sarah
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: The Neurologist Diaries: Catching Cold on Blackbeard's Ship
I love this! It flowed nicely, and I really liked the ending. One nitpick I have though is.. “And!” He wasn't done, apparently. " I let those merchant miscreants go ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Writer's Block
I’m so sick of writer's block Can’t you see I’m already lost? Yet you stand there and mock My talent is always the cost You make me angry all the ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Gymnopédie
The plot of this story was nice, I suppose, but it did seem a little humdrum to me. It left me wondering things that should have been in the story ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: My Hero? Chapter 1
This is such a good story! The flow was nice, and you could already get a feel for the characters. I do have a couple nitpicks though: "There was nothing ...
Jun 26, 2011