speakerskat

Welcome everyone! I write poetry & can't wait to read your writings ;)

Thank you for the advice, next time i'll try what you said. I have to agree though, now that someone has mentioned it... it is a bit...bland and long. I ...

Short and sweet, I like it! I'm not much of a critic (i spelled it wrong :( ) but outa all 3 I liked the very last one, it was ...

thanks so much, I'll try to come up with something else soon! :)

i'm not a very good person to make suggestions (this is better that most of what I write :)). But I really like it and I think it's the perfect ...

This is my first time writing a free verse! Let me know what you think and were I can improve ;) !

Free verse What is freedom? Is it the ability to speak? To think To breathe without burden? Can it be more than your obvious sort? When this is asked to ...

Awesome! Loved the picture it paints of love, it keeps you with an open mind in the end so you can answer it for yourself (I like that part best ...

Not to lon not to short, I like it. at first it seemed a little depressing however you totaly made it suberb by adding that second stanza, it floos realy ...

Poet Being a poet is so grand, Writing short stanzas about lala-lands, But a poet does not just write about imaginary things, like 100ft rubies or giant rings, A poet ...

Seagulls on a Rock Hip hop seagulls on a rock, Zip zop seaguls won't stop, Bing bang seagulls go cling clang, Bam boom seagullls in the afternoon. Oh no crash ...

Once upon a time in Greece, there was a black bear named Ming, who lived near Mt. Olympus. One day Ming challengingly said these words to Zeus, the king of ...

hi I'm new. I really hope you like my writings. So far you can find them under poetry. :wink:, speakerskat

This is the story of Picky Peak-a-Boo She won't eat for me nor you. She won't eat anything brown,gray,white, or blue even if you tell her to. She won't eat ...

The watermelon so small right now. So big it will be when it's grown. Started out with the ground plow. Now it is all alone.