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  • Other Poetry Re: Frost Bite

    Hey. I think I'll give you 4 out of five. Good: It had a very well laid out rhyme scheme, a good meaning/moral and it was well themed. Improve: Proofread(check ...

    Dec 1, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Dark Shadow

    "My life and all others are inter-twined.Nothing can compare to me, yet I am stuck at the bottom. I am no ordinary shadow, but the one cast by all that ...

    Dec 1, 2010


Some people are hourglass shaped, some people are apple shaped, some people are pear shaped, some people are even bean pole shaped, but if we’re not careful we all become banana shaped. This is your gentle posture reminder.
— Ranger