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Re: As Lovely as it Saeems
it was well done. a bit too short. you might want to make it longer. also include more expression. that is all you need to work on. space
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Seedpaw's Fight
that chapter was interesting. what show is this form? otherwise you did well. space
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Fantasy Reporter
That was LOL funny! no grammar mistakes or spelling. and you just need to interview harry's wand! space
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Get over it my friend ch 1
it was interesting. The plot was good, but have more romance. the grammar was, good. you just need a little more romance. space
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
well, HEY PEEPS! I'm space. I write fanfiction (alvin and the chipmunks, HSM). and romance I can do! I am obsessed with HSM. andI love this place too! space
May 6, 2008