spaced_out

Here is moi review. Your story is overly cliche, to the point that I stopped reading it. What you need to do, is sit down for a hour or two ...

MEMEME! it's HSM\AATC FF so be aware. here is chapter 1: now 2: thanks, MATT

CHAPTER TWO: pressing up, two big newse, and two kidnappers! the plane ride was short. as Kenny said "it aint a big deal" Matt was the first to speak. "Dear ...

Okay, I just want to start with this-a little too confusing. You should definitely try to clarify who is talking when. they were married. Who was married? ZAc and V/ ...

this is a story about what is between HSM 1 and 2. CHAPTER 1: mourning the loss of you one day Matt was walking with a few of his best ...

And I'll take the dibbiez on the snake hole!

here is what you need to do, READ musicals like ilike Freddie then start to think and write then act it out then sell it for 1,00,000-but that's another story ...

here you go!: Every year on the afternoon of December 24, you, a Christmas procrastinator, loaded down with sacks and boxes, walk from store to store, down endless aisles, your ...

I wish for you to do my story: this would make me happy. Matt

BUMP up my thread! space

It was a good plot, but the use of copyrighted characters is plagerism and is illegal. I recomend you change the story a bit to make it your own. NOTE: ...

Life and Death a chipmunk tale BY: spaced_out DC: I do not own Alvin and the chipmunks, I only own my OC, Matt. PS: this takes place in 2008. The ...

This was just plane BAD. You need to spell better. You also need to work on your grammar. If you think that I am being harsh, I am not. It ...

That was a very interesting story. I think that bear fanfics are..well, bad. But what you did here was great. good story, and all spelling and grammer is good. Though ...

1.If death dies, do we? NO. 2. If there are infinite possibbilities in an infininte world, is everything possibly somewhere? YES. 3. If the debauched marmalade lord, weids a cup ...