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Re: Gimme what I love
Hey, this is a draft at the moment, need more inspiration to finish and tweak it. But it seems good for a rough copy. Have a look, review, love,hate or ...
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Re: I Suck At Poetry
ya I think i might be able to give you some tips I usually just write what ever come to my head and hope it sounds good. I know it's ...
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Re: My Dreams
When I look up at the stars, I just don't see little lights. I see a world of possibilities, That can take flight. I know I am just hoping, That ...
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Re: Destined
I believe That are detineys are entwined now that I see that my fate been decided how i hope that in some way you will remeber me I just wish ...
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Re: the incredibal icecube
The incredible ice cube I remember it was year 88 B.C. and I was running from the other kids in the tribe. I was running and tripped and fell on ...
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Re: Chapter 1
Morcia is a plentiful land. The people of Morcia where doing there every day routine; shopping, cleaning, teaching, training and, fetching water. When all of a sudden the ground started ...
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Re: Never Again
It is very good but it does remind me of Kelly Clarkson but i do see alot of a difference
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Re: Alone Today
That is really good.
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Re: Flying High Again
Flying High Again Like a bird in the wind Don't know where Im going Ya, I'm feelin Fine Just one more Time trying to find a Ryme put on the ...
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Re: You and I
Again...first time at this kind of writing so I'm not sure if it's good... I lay, in my room all alone And I say, to myself that there’s nothing wrong ...
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Re: Conspiracy
Great job like what u did. Big paramore fan
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Re: Believe Me Then
I'd like to tell you what it's like The way I feel for you inside But the words just won't come out I don't think you'd believe them anyhow There's ...
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Re: Caged Bird
To many comas but it is very good.
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Re: Before I Died
I am buried as you cry You think I hated you, but it was a lie I always loved you and you never knew Before I died I wanted to ...
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Re: Tonight
Um not to be to rude but it wasnt that great.
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