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I really like your descriptions. It made everything more vivid. The only problem was that at the beginning it made it kind of slow and it was hard for me ...

The rhythm seemed a little awkward to me, but I thought it was really funny. Give it a little work and it'll be hilarious.

The mime is supposed to represent a person who is different. I'm trying to show how harshly some people can react to something different and that people need to realize ...

I read this when I was like 11 so I didn't really get it. All I know is that I hated the pigs and I felt bad for the work ...

I really love the imagery in this story. You are really a good writer and don't let ANYONE tell you you're not. BTW, thanks for welcoming me. I look forward ...

I read this book a while back and I thought it was really good. It made me cry, especially when he started realizing the way people were treating him.