souldier

Nice poem, I think it's one of the best you've written so far. There's one thing I might suggest that kind of distracted me about it. The line that says: ...

I've got to remember to click on the reply button and not the post button. :oops: As I was going to say, I agree that you write "I hate" too ...

Well, I was having trouble reading this, but I'm sure it mostly was because it is late here. Anyway, it was a nice beginning. I was kind of confused about ...