sophie_emma

Right, okay cool :) I didn't expect it to be perfect, I literally JUST wrote it. I don't know, It kind of reminded me of myself...just more broken. Lol. I'll ...

It's not a story or anything, just a piece of writing that I had to write. It's a boy meets girl kind of thing, bit cliche, but dramatic. Kind of...review? ...

Thanks :) I need a good critic like you. My friends are all too 'wow it's amazingly perfect...' rarara. So yeah thanks. I wasn't sure about some of the bits ...

This is really good! Keep writing it, and your characters are really good, even though you haven't really introduced them properly. But you could do that later on. I want ...

His hands running up and down her spine, his lips pressed to her neck. Her hands on his chest, her legs wrapped around his perfect body. My heart stopped. My ...

Hey :) I'm new on here, so I thought i'd introduce myself a bit. and get to know some people on here. I'm Sophie, I'm 16 years old, i'm from ...