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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Two Snakes

    See how we rustle and press like two rainbow snakes we coil into each other's flaws our scales, now truculent and soft can barely hold their form - sealed in ...

    Oct 18, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I need you.

    My! This poem teems with emotion. I don't know whether it was the short, choppy structure, or the desolate setting (I loved the lone bird flying by!). Anyways, this left ...

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Pieta

    A reflection on my favourite statue ever, Michelangelo's Pieta - just in time for Easter. Once, you winged His shoulderblade; Once, you bore a king. Now you must hold His ...

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: To Juddy

    RIP Juddy. __________________________________________________________________________ Juddy, It hasn't rained once since you died. Strange, since the heavens should have already split their roiling se

    Nov 22, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Without Weight

    Hey! I really liked this! The poem may not have a running plot, or a clear-cut moral...but I felt like you were trying to convey a fleeting moment, a certain ...

    Nov 22, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: don't even think about coming for dessert

    Loved this! i could feel what you were writing about on my tongue as you wrote - it was AWESOME. I applaud the strength of your imagery! About the so-called ...

    Nov 22, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Throat Muscles

    Hello! I agree, this poem is so powerful! You've really managed to write about drug addiction (so often written about!) in a way that strikes the reader as totally unique. ...

    Apr 10, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Cowboy Ballad

    Gosh, this poem is entertaining! I love the way you've altered the language to make it so uniquely coyboy, and I think you've really succeeded. Its such an oeiginal idea ...

    Apr 10, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Following the Three Wise Men

    Trapped in corners of a desert night, she feels a message on the wind - whispers of a sinless boy come to free her of her sins; already she longed ...

    Apr 10, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Circle

    I really loved this poem. The personification of Death was extremely powerful. The use of brackets was original and added to the shock factor. I disagree that you used to ...

    Feb 21, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Hallo Everyone! My name is Sopher, I'm new, and I love to write! Haha and despite that sentence I enjoy any creative writing that is original and individual. Look forward ...

    Feb 20, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Poem about disapproval

    thanks for the tips!

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Poem about disapproval

    Amelia, They’ve found another way To push the needle into the hay To carve what they won’t say Into your skin. Amelia, They’ve cocked the gun, and eaten the key ...

    Feb 18, 2009


How odd I can have all this inside me and to you it’s just words.
— David Foster Wallace