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Re: Two Snakes
See how we rustle and press like two rainbow snakes we coil into each other's flaws our scales, now truculent and soft can barely hold their form - sealed in ...
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: I need you.
My! This poem teems with emotion. I don't know whether it was the short, choppy structure, or the desolate setting (I loved the lone bird flying by!). Anyways, this left ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Pieta
A reflection on my favourite statue ever, Michelangelo's Pieta - just in time for Easter. Once, you winged His shoulderblade; Once, you bore a king. Now you must hold His ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: To Juddy
RIP Juddy. __________________________________________________________________________ Juddy, It hasn't rained once since you died. Strange, since the heavens should have already split their roiling se
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Without Weight
Hey! I really liked this! The poem may not have a running plot, or a clear-cut moral...but I felt like you were trying to convey a fleeting moment, a certain ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: don't even think about coming for dessert
Loved this! i could feel what you were writing about on my tongue as you wrote - it was AWESOME. I applaud the strength of your imagery! About the so-called ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Throat Muscles
Hello! I agree, this poem is so powerful! You've really managed to write about drug addiction (so often written about!) in a way that strikes the reader as totally unique. ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Cowboy Ballad
Gosh, this poem is entertaining! I love the way you've altered the language to make it so uniquely coyboy, and I think you've really succeeded. Its such an oeiginal idea ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Following the Three Wise Men
Trapped in corners of a desert night, she feels a message on the wind - whispers of a sinless boy come to free her of her sins; already she longed ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: The Circle
I really loved this poem. The personification of Death was extremely powerful. The use of brackets was original and added to the shock factor. I disagree that you used to ...
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hallo Everyone! My name is Sopher, I'm new, and I love to write! Haha and despite that sentence I enjoy any creative writing that is original and individual. Look forward ...
Feb 20, 2009 -
Re: A Poem about disapproval
thanks for the tips!
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: A Poem about disapproval
Amelia, They’ve found another way To push the needle into the hay To carve what they won’t say Into your skin. Amelia, They’ve cocked the gun, and eaten the key ...
Feb 18, 2009
