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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Wolf (Temporary title till I can find something)

    Anything by the name of wolf or werewolf would catch someones eyes, but you could use a name for wolf or werewolf in a different language like greek or Italian. ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Clumsy

    Great! It was a perfect and sweet poem. Short and sweet. I loved it and would love to give you points for it. I won't though because my points are ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: ---

    I love the title. I love the fact that you would do that to the title of a post and that is a good way of telling that you care ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Clouds of Chalk

    The entry to this poem was very exciting for the first part and at first I thought you were talking about love, but when I kept reading I noticed that ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Evening of Christmas

    Great song. I barely have anything to say about it but great work. The peice itself is a little bit neat for a few lyrics and you use the words ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Land in flames

    Good job. For those who like a twist in their song, everyone will like this piece. The words were great and I think I would give your overall song a ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Glance

    Great piece of writing that you have made and that is fantastic what you have done with it. I loved the piece and it touched my heart so deep that ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: White Witch

    Wow! A beautiful drawing made by a true artist. The picture itself is fascinating and the thought of you doing it on the computer make it even more inspiring. Great ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Rain

    An extremely descriptive piece and the punctuation and notation of the words and sentences were executed perfectly. I hope that you will write more stories in the future so that ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Ocean

    Fantastic story but the punctuation was off and I would definitely count you off on that. Um there really isn't anything else to say besides good job and keep up ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Party in the Mist (lyrics)

    Yeah thanks! I'll try to change that, but in the mean time I need to write a story.

    Dec 29, 2010
  • General Articles Re: My Special Biography

    Fantastic story my friend but i wish it would be more exciting. I'm into exciting stories with a twist at the end. I would give you 40 points for overall ...

    Dec 28, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dragon Story

    The overall story is fantastic but sometimes the words get jumbled and it get's hard to understand. The overall qualities of the book are great and I think you could ...

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Party in the Mist (lyrics)

    The sky in shining blue, and I look over at you. There's a rainbow in the sky. Mist is clearing now, tears roll down your cheek, but I've had enough ...

    Dec 27, 2010


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