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I surrendered to the shafts of Sleep which bright Pain could not penetrate; blissful numbing of the mind. Curtains rose before the screen of all that I could not have ...

This is an old thread, but oh well. The only thing that really bugged me was the last line Crumbles in the wind I just felt that crumbling in the ...

I'm not that guard who could stand and cry, "You shall not lead me there!" My sword sleeps now. My bow broken. My arrows are spent, and I unfold. This ...

One cannot write a poem about love without being in love, One cannot write a poem about death without experiencing death, One cannot write a poem about kindness without genuinely ...

You can't tell if the third one is a branch with vines growing out of it, or if it is one of those barbed wire polls, and this is a ...

I really liked the play and thought the poem was ok, although reading the poem first did make the play a more interesting read!

Appreciate the crit thx.

This was a good read!

This is short and really good.

LOL. Arnold and Paris now that's a movie!

How much? j/k you're a fine painter.

I think while reading this I thought this was a good conceptual idea, some of the lines seemed a little forced, but I thought your ending was really strong, so ...

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I read all the posts that you have for this so far. I'll I can say is that you should keep going, if you haven't already! This is very good.

Just agreeing with the previous post that this reads more like prose than poetry, but saying that it is still really good prose.