sokool15

Thanks guys! I didn't notice the sticky -I'll go check it out. Cheers~ 8)

I'm not sure if this is the correct forum for this sort of thing...if not, someone please move it to the correct forum (if there is one). Anyway, I'm wondering ...

Geez...there are so many bloodthirsty women in Greek Mythology, but none of them kill their husbands/boyfriends, per se...they just kill their husband's lovers, children, relatives, and pets. :P Eg, M

It seems as if people should think about that before they even submit their stories...if they don't want to be critiqued, why do they submit them in the first place? ...

Yes...I think 'whispering against her /his lips' is a very overused phrase. (Yuck, by the way. What about bad breath?) And lots of dumb descriptions. Also, have the hero say ...

I actually started a story like this, and I've read other books (Bartimaeus trilogy) like that as well. It actually works really well because it gives you more scope for ...

How about a challenge? Write a romance whose plot is not absolutely stale and old and rotten. It's harder than it sounds. Or, if that's not to your taste, write ...

'Too Late Now' is on hold right now. My noble motives are this: I need time to re-assess my goals, find where I'm going with it and find a way ...