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I loved this piece. It was really touching. Just one tiny little error typo. 'm' instead of 'me', I think. But this was a really nice, touching story. Congrats. Yrs ...

This was really great work! I was impressed. I really enjoyed reading it and your word choice and the flow of your language is impressive. Good job... 8)

Is this what you meant about the spacing on the paragraphs? I'm not looks kind of funny to me. Was I mistaken in what I thought you meant? Anyway, here's ...

I liked this poem...it's creepy and chilling. That's what you meant to do, right? First of all, some of your rhyming pattern is a little awkward. I lost sight of ...

Always almost and almost never always This is pretty much a roundabout way of saying 'not very often'. I was referring to sanity here. Always almost, I'm always almost sane, ...

Have you ever wondered what is in insanity's thought? Now you'll know, I'll tell you, because I've been there and back I've seen myself when my mind and my heart ...

...couldn't remember for the life of him. Besides, running across a field and trying to dodge blades of grass that were taller than him, knowing how to work a Shrink ...

Thanks for the critiques! When I have time, I'll definitely look into them. I do agree on your ideas...especially the 'bulbous'. Would you believe I actually went back and took ...

When Your Mind Was Empty The way it used to be You'd sit at the desk Feathered pen in heavy hand Waiting for the words to come Waiting for inspiration. ...

Hey, Donqui! This is really, really weird. I have a brother who does the EXACT same things as you! He plays saxaphone, mandolin, and guitar, and a little flute and ...

"He sighed and looked over Agnes once more..." I don't like this particular phrasing. Over all, it's a great piece...I enjoyed it. That last part, however, sounds as if he ...

Hi, Elise! I feel kind of funny, welcoming a new person, myself being new and all, but...well, like calls to like! Nothing wrong with the blind leading the blind, now, ...

Thanks for the tips! I look forward to chewing apart my story! I will remember what you said about exclamation points! And I definitely see what you mean! Thanks again ...

The Ordinary Frog Once Upon a Time... Yep, you guessed it: In a Far Off Kingdom... There was a frog. He was not a talking frog, or a frog prince, ...

You all have my eternal gratitude for making me feel so welcome! Thanks! Okay, on to duty. I seem to have som FAQ's already! ~I write some fantasy, some comedy, ...