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This is based on the poem 'Lochinvar,' but you don't need to read the poem to understand the story at all. It all started one lovely fall day, in the ...

Heh heh heh...hope you'll continue this. I really, really like it. *echo of above critiques* but otherwise great. Yours always, 8)

I really liked this; funny, entertaining...especially the part about the compass. I've often felt like taking the nearest thing to hand and stabbing someone with it, but I never really ...

Ha! I've got you all beat with 38...and a lot of them are series, too! A lot of these are great books, but some of them are...I just don't understand ...

How about a challenge? Write a romance whose plot is not absolutely stale and old and rotten. It's harder than it sounds. Or, if that's not to your taste, write ...

Just a little beginning...what do you think? Comments? (NOTE: I did NOT write the song at the beginning. I claim no credit for it AT ALL.) I tamed the winged ...

Heh heh heh... this story almost got me in trouble! I was reading it in the computer lab during my music theory class, and I burst out laughing and everybody ...

THIS WAS HILARIOUS! lol. I loved this! funny and funnier. Yours always, 8)

Hey, do you think the Mcdonald's scene is waaay too long? Yours, 8)

I was thinking I would have Jeremy hang out with Mel a lot, and they become friends. Then it turns out that Jeremy was hanging out with her in order ...

I need your opinion...should I continue this, or let it drop as hopelessly redundant and stupid? I don't know that much about the acting and film world, so my plan ...

Thanks all for the great crits...I just changed the 'salty' stuff. I think you're might make a good longer story. If you ever see something on this sight that contains ...

This is a true account of a dream I had last night. It was so strange and starts out like any old dream, but then weird, hilarious things start happening. ...

Yes, I agree...you could have put Part 1 and Part 2 together. I think you need a little clearer separation from when Lyla is daydreaming to when she is in ...

I just dropped a critique on your 'sequel' to this piece, which I also enjoyed very much! I really, really, really like it. Overall, I'm not one for language and ...