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HAAA! I've just thought of a new worst book, and I am talking number 1 on the list! The Jungle. I couldn't stand this book. I must admit I'm there ...

:shock: Oh, wow...emphatic AMEN to everything Snoink just said. Great insights! I stand humbled *bows head and clasps hands*

Here I am, once again *singing* Um...overall, good. AGain, I'm a little lost since I haven't been able to read the whole thing, but I trust I can still crit ...

That's a hard question, I think...because it just depends on what you want your character to be. Also the time period and the place. In certain time periods, you weren't ...

1. Billy Budd (so sad and cornily heroic...idiotic) 2. Animal Farm *gasp gack bleech* 3. The Better Angels of our Nature (kind of weird. About an angel falling in love ...

This is sooo good! Your ideas are really good. I hope Cadenza doesn't get too far, though...curious as I am about Cello and Viola. Would it be too much to ...

I'm loving this! I play the viola, violin and I sing, so the character names...loving them! Shadow got most of the I'm off to chapt 4!

Sorry! ignore this...I accidentally double-posted. :oops:

Retail store...tee hee... Overall, I thought it was cute. Not great, but cute. It's hard to explain. OH! I like your "1/2 n 1/2" name! That's such a random name, ...

I really liked this! The piece was very cute. I thought it was interesting how, even though it's in first person, you developed the 'Hannah' character more than the 'I' ...

Well, here I am! I couldn't find some parts of the story, but in the parts I did read, Poor Imp and the others gave such in-depth crits...there was nothing ...

Sounds good but for the mustard. Sorry, but I hate mustard *gag* Have you tried it with some egg, too? Egg and tomato go well together. I'll try your recipe ...

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Some people aren't able to separate truth from fiction. I'm sure you have all heard the story of the Princess and the Pea. I had not read it until very ...

My brother and I wrote this together on a camping trip. The second verse is my least favorite. Suggestions? Hail! to the uttermost fear in Time to the Great Wheel's ...