sokool15

Omg, wtf. This is like, ROFL-ing funny. LMFAO!

Hey, there! Took me a little bit, but here I am, critiquing. I loved this story, I honestly did. Your characters were loveable, your style was engaging and clear, easy ...

This is the story of what I think would have happened to Jacob Black if Bella had never come into his life. Sort of. What I mean by that is: ...

Thanks. I liked it too, because it's kind of what I would look like if I were more old-fashioned and elegant. :P I love twilight too, btw - I think ...

Hey, welcome to YWS... though I see you're already a Junior Writer now, congrats. :) Need help, critiques or a friendly helping hand, just pm me! I'm always at your ...

Sorry, sorry! I swear I didn't even see this, even though I checked your portfolio. I must have just missed it. All I saw was nine, which I already critiqued, ...

Greetings, friends; What you see below are two different versions of the beginnings for my now-completed fantasy novel. I wrote the first one when I first started the novel, then ...

Haha, wow. That was an interesting twist - kind of funny to see how different the series could have been if Edward was just a little less strong-willed. It would ...

Hey there! Glad to see you started this. I would say overall it does have the potential to be cheesy, but it also has the potential to be amazing, depending ...

Thanks so much for your great critiques! Snoink~ You expressed the deepest fear of my inner heart, haha. I was so worried they would be cheesy on paper. The thing ...

It sounds like a good plot - the appearance of her dream-man sounds slightly cliche, though. Perhaps you did that on purpose. I'm not sure if this would be the ...

Mmm, very nice once again. (I critiqued your other one too) What you've written here is exactly like something Stephenie Meyer would have written! I can get over that. Almost...too ...

Wow! I couldn't believe how well you captured Stephenie Meyer's style! You have a really good grasp on the character's, too. I could imagine that very scene being in Twilight ...

Yeek, nice! I really enjoyed the Twilight series, and I love all these fanfics about it, from different perspectives. They really bring different ideas to the original stories, too. (people ...

Oh... oh... *sigh* That was the most beautiful, tragic story ever! And lovely at the same time. Amazing. I don't even have any critiques, so I suppose I shouldn't have ...