sokool15

Hello, Yet Another Darkened Mind. Welcome to the site. I'm a Christian, but I think that's about all we have in common, yes? I love music, but not the same ...

I liked the cool sun, and the astronaut makes me want to jump up and down and clap my hands. *Jumps up and down and claps hands* :D But where ...

I saw some stuff at the very beginning, so I'm just going to critique as I go along...forgive anything i say that doesn't make sense. cried a three year old ...

Yes...I think 'whispering against her /his lips' is a very overused phrase. (Yuck, by the way. What about bad breath?) And lots of dumb descriptions. Also, have the hero say ...

Oh, I like the second one very much...she is pretty, ja? :) Ooer, the first one...violent, yes? but good. Only problem...the female pirate...her face is too matter-of-fact for someone who ...

Ooh, ja, the puffy white clouds...! They make me want to dive into them. They are very comfortable-looking things, are clouds, yes? *straightens collar* hem. I will point out the ...

So very huggable...perhaps I shall sweep them into my arms and carry them away, yes? Better than petting a puppy, as they say. Anyway, *hem* good job. The girl's left ...

Wasn't going to reply to this, but I saw the photographs and thought, "this girl needs to say something wise," because two of them caught my attention. So here I ...

Ja, ja *nods wisely* I agree with the other critiques. 1. Absolutely beautiful. It really does look as if the trees are kissing...a wonderful thing to capture in a photo. ...

Uy...I am truly impressed. You have good sunsets where you are, yes? Individually, here you are: 1. Ach. Not my favorite. It is just to murky...just a lot of clouds ...

Absolutely astonishing. Splendiferous. A lovely shot, I applaud you. Not much to say except for stating the obvious, which is to cropt it. Again, *polite clapping* bravo. Cheers! You have ...

Oh, yes, I liked this very much! Very well done, your writing always, smooth, fluent and, adopting the manner of the french, I give you smacking kiss on the cheek ...

Hi, there. :smt006 Glad to see me? :wink: I liked this chapter. I want to tell you that I absolutely adore the game you've invented, and envy it absolutely. It ...

This is an intriguing stimulated our interest and presented intrigue without giving away what the plot line was actually going to be, which is a mistake of a lot of ...

duh? Pat Buchanan! :P