sokool15

Jeesh, depressing. 6/10. *sniff sniff*

I'm currently in the process of watching the BBC television show based on the novel "North and South" by Elizabeth Gaskell. I am so greatly enjoying the movie, I thought ...

Something my dad brought home from work...I loved it. I'm not sure who the author is, but there's more I can post if you want it - let me know. ...

*removed*

I liked this. I have heard of 'bussing tables' but not 'busboy.' I don't know. But if she is American, she would use Amercian terms, yes? So you choose. Anyway, ...

Hmmm...while previous critiquer may be right about agents, I myself really, really like your story and think it's extremely intriguing and interesting. Some books have no action at all in ...

Ooohhh...very very nice, indeed. Rated 'R' for language, right? Or did you already rate it? I'm sorry if I missed the rating and am telling you somethig you already know. ...

Goodnes, this was incredibly refreshing, my dear! The suicide plot, and the calm way she stepped up to save him, just asking him on a date...urgh. I didn't want it ...

Hmmm...that was captivating. A very nice piece, indeed. I notice all the way through you tended to do long sentences, going on and on forever, with a lot of commas, ...

It's good! I agree, it could have been longer. The first post of a story should show us at least a bit about the character, although more can be revealed ...

8/10 catchy! I like it.

Er...3/10? I was confused.

Aside: er, sorry, chineyne...I'm not a moderater so you can ignore me if you like, but it's one of the rules here not to use chat-speak. We write out our ...

Tee hee...hee hee hee...*subdued giggles* Have you ever read that story...argh, I forget what it's called, but it's kinda like this. It starts with a narrative about a unicorn who ...

I agree with Snoink. Er...hem...the little illustration about the strip tease, if slightly unorthodox, was effective. Pay attention to Snoink! Your writing style seems to flow smoothly and your gramma