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“I wonder,” She said icily, “does anybody really love you?” oooh...ouch. :) That's gotta hurt. "I wonder," she said Lower-case 'S' and you'll be fine. Wow... a great chapter, once ...

Morgan le Fey paced the secluded room in the top of her tower, that looked out over her land. Her castle was placed just where she liked it - in ...

A guy named Fred who cares about 'his dress' and talks about it constantly. Who could not vote for him?

Cool! I shall take advantage immediately.

Hardee hardee har... I found this last year...can I be the Talk Like a Distinguished English Soldier Fighting the Pirates? It's much more natural. Let me give the pirate thing ...

Um...question. When is Arthur going to come in? Because a lot of Morgan's movement and excitement etc comes from what Arthur does, because her life is pretty much based on ...

Jenna: How old is Arthur, and what is his rank at this point? Are we going with the legend where Merlin raises Arthur, or what? Name: Morgan le Fey Class: ...

One never knows what could happen in a graveyard. Ever since I was young, I remember frequenting the local graveyard nearly every day. Sometimes with my father or my mother, ...

I loved the first paragraph, and the last paragraph, but that's about all I could read. I'm sorry, but I can only agree with previous critiquer. It's very hard to ...

All right, gyr, great job again! :) hmmm...the four of us have a bond? The four being...Sharr Kavan, Mitra, Lativichia and...whoever the other one was. Cool. All right, sweetness. I ...

Oh, wow. That was really good! Um, yeah, not a lot of helpful criticism here - look at what the other people said! heh heh. So yeah. Well, I guess ...

Er...dare I say 0/10? lol, just because I don't get it. Explain it to me and I'll be happy to revisit and give it a higher rating.

Heh, Dr. Suess, right? (is that how you spell it?) Well, if I can't make any awful puns about hurricanes, maybe I'll just end up calling you Thing Two. I ...

His body went cold during the night even though he was effectively wrapped in a thick blanket. He glanced at the mountains, darkly looming over him. He suddenly wasn’t as ...

Thank, sunshine, for all your great tips! Heh, yes, Brad's name. His real name is Bradken, but his friends horten it to Brad...does that make it any better? I just ...