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Just an idea...should I follow through on it or is it lame? Let me know what you think, and whether or not it's worth continuing. Critiques, as always, immensely welcome! ...

Morgan paused, hesitating. She had done six experiments with the spell, three of them successful. She had transformed herself into a large white dove and soared over the plains, surveying ...

EDIT: Rated 'R' for language, yes? Well, I may not be a 'good' critiquer but I'll do what I can. :P Your one major problem that I could see is ...

Hey, Heather! What's up? So here I am...perhaps my hyperactive conscience will finally be alleviated. I'll critique it as I go, so if something I say makes even less sense ...

Cheerio, friend! Welcome ever-so to the YWS!!! We're all a crazy bunch of lunatics here, but we have OODLES of fun (whether it's because of or in spite of our ...

Greetings and salutations, good friend Warlock. What is this Worlds of Warcraft whatever you people have been talking about? Is it something I should look into or something to be ...

Lik Ari, I have a serious problem with nicknames, so tell us what to call you or be Helton forever! Helton isn't so bad, actually, as it reminds me of ...

Hello, TicTacToe. Hee hee...you're going to have a lot of nicknames around here, I can already see. Welcome to the site! We have fun times here, and we'll all here ...

Morgan looked at the doves, twenty-one of them, separated into seven groups of three. She hadn't washed in twenty-one days, but the discomfort of her greasy hair and filthy skin ...

The J’engar were awkward on their steeds, unused to riding any beast at all, but they managed because they must. Tense errors. You're talking in past tense here, "they managed" ...

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Wow. I really, really enjoyed this piece. Brilliant! Really. I loved the way you began with the childish game, escalated very quickly (and with an admirable lack of info-dumping, bravo) ...

Is there a certain rule or something about when to post? Like, is there a cycle - where everybody has to post before you post again? Just curiosity and for ...

8/10 pretty good...are you speaking of specific poetry hear, or just poetry in general? :P

6/10 all this 'as I lay dying' is getting redundant! But pretty cool nevertheless.