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there a story behind the name 'Nariel,' or is it just your name? If so, it's a really cool name! Welcome to the site, by the way. I must admit ...

A-HA!!! You're one of the OLD people! I'm entitled to make jokes about age because my 10-year-old sister has often been mistaken for my daughter. :P Anyway, welcome every-so-much to ...

Garret sighed and straightened his only slightly torn and faded suit, stepping into the brightly lit ballroom. People were already on the dance floor, rocking out to some strange song ...

Nancy slowly opened her eyes and started at the sight that greeted her. She was staring up at the bottom of some guy's face - on top of which there ...

KITTY!!!! HOW ARE YOU??? It's been so long! How's life? *hem* Anyway, down to business. ************************** Garret broke through the edge of the woods. He was worried. The little matchgirl ...

Garret strode through the forest, axe slung over one shoulder. He was whistling a merry tune through his teeth, long legs covering the distance with ease. "What-ho, what ho!" Garret ...

I think the person who first started the post is supposed to begin the story... Name: Garrett (remember that story about the woodcutter with the three sons: two smart, nice, ...

Yay! I'm so glad to see this old thread revived. A toast to old friends! *drags Nancy Nimbleheimer back out of the closet* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Nancy straightened abruptly, all traces of ...

Chapter Two Jack woke the next morning to find his walk neatly shoveled again. He saw the woman's footprints leading up to his truck and cursed as he remembered that ...

Thanks for the great comments you guys! Appreciated as always. The coat was not meant to be a big plot thing...it's supposed to belong to the woman who's shoveling. I ...

Something I wrote at one o'clock last night...fun. Jack sat inside his small coffee-shop, sighing contentedly as he sipped his scalding hot cocoa and watching the steady fall of rain ...

I'll be back to give a full crit later, but for now...exciting! Until tomorrow...I'll be back.

Some of it seems a bit awkward to me. I was having trouble transitionining between the reading and writing of the letter, with a lot of repetitions and stuff. Help, ...

Hey, Emily? Or are you the oracle? Or Emily and the Oracle? Anyway, thanks for the pm. Here I am! Okay, nasty critique first, then I'll praise and gush later, ...

She knew very well what he was, a bastard. Lol, that was truly funny. I'm really sorry, but I don't have time for a full, line to line critique as ...