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Nancy frowned. "I don't play basketball. Do you?" Everyone turned to look where Nancy was talking too and jumped as they saw another girl, glowering in the shadows. She was ...

Wow, I can't believe it was just a quote, and I thought it was a poem! That weird outhouse person must have twisted it a little 'upon' instead of 'on' ...

Today when my family was out, deep in the woods, getting a Christmas tree, one of us had to go to the bathroom. There was a small outhouse sitting randomly ...

Nancy grinned widely at the someone startled girl. "I know what you're thinking," she said, eyes sparkling wickedly. "What," said Kayla sarcastically, shoving the notepad back into her pocket. "You ...

Hey, peoples! Thanks so much for deciding to be in my storybook. This is a place to discuss the various plot nuances with people, maybe give a little bit of ...

Nancy grinned and shrugged. "Just Codie, having fun again. Dumb old Codie, always playing with her funny-thing illusion playbits." Nancy shook her head, frowning. She always fell into that strange, ...

ARgh! I'm so behind...we should get a discussion group going for updates!

Hey, pretty good! I really don't have any new critiques with this chapter. Just that one sentence problem that I see consistently throughout all your chapters...it's like you're not sure ...

Please rate 'R' for language and mature themes! Sorrow to sound like I'm nagging, but it's really important, especially with younger kids on the site!

Well, I'm a Senior, dears, and believe me, it's not all it's made out to be! You're still a teenager, and you still have wildly sporadic bursts of hormones. :wink: ...

Nancy shook her head. So had Lassie actually been a human? "Cayman, am I crazy?" she asked abruptly. Her train of thought had been upset by that music, that piercing ...

Lol, Chaotic, I just went to your profile. "Life was so simple when boys had cooties..." LOVE IT!!! *ehem* Yes, well, here I am, once again. It's nice to be ...

Garret watched in dismay as his matchgirl was led away by another woman, over to the prince. His matchgirl - he still didn't know her name - and the prince ...

I would suggest rated 'R' for language and mature content. I read stuff rated pg-13, but I wouldn't read this story. No offense, the writing was great, but I don't ...