sokool15

Hellooooo! Sorry it took me so shamefully long. I got finished with a test and got out early from classes, so I decided to spend my free time with YOU! ...

Sincerely hoping you can help me on this one. It will eventually get more romantic, which is why I posted it here, but this is the general idea: Eve Warden ...

Don't give up hope! I'm going to review this as soon as I ever can... I've read it and I liked it, but I'll give you a more detailed critique ...

Bick, sorry dude but the other critiquer is right. I looked it up a while ago and there should be a space after the ellipsis. However, just know that most ...

Hey, there, Bick (still thinking about your real name. Pm soon with results) So, this was really interesting. If you were trying to create a dramatic change between Alice's voice ...

How could you do this? How could you defile the most beloved and HOT vampire of our times? And killing off Bella was unforgiveable, as well as irreverent. In this... ...

Okay, everybody else has already critiqued the small bits. I thought there was some awkwardness but your writing style wasn't bad at all. I have one major problem with the ...

Hey there! I'm soooo glad I found this - you should have told me you'd posted it! (pm is on the way, just so you know.) First of all - ...

Hey there! Thanks for reading this story. It's kind of weird and came to me in the middle of the night, so there you go. It's supposed to be abstract, ...

hee hee... Your actual jokes are awesome and your drawings aren't bad at all - but it's unclear. You should make clear outlines between boxes and better indications of which ...

Hey there! Thanks for the pm - could you pm me with the next one too? I really like these stories, but when you don't post for awhile I forget ...

Was this the story you were talking about? Anyway, here I am! Okay... I will say that the first part of this was absolutely wonderful. Amazing, practically perfect in every ...

Hey, thanks for all the critiques! Sorry it took me so long, I just sort of forgot about this story. However, it is completely finished, so if I get comments ...

ARGH! I hate my computer! I just typed up a big old response to this, and them my computer deleted it. :evil: Well, what I saw, abbreviated, was this: thanks ...

Thank you guys so much! Critiques are always welcome, even if they are only full of adoration and praise. Hey, I'm as human as the next girl and have a ...