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lol, plz rit more soon? And I thought the tense-swiching was cool, y'no? Cause it made it all cool 'n stuff. And werewolves rock, don't tak thm owt!!!!!! p.S. wtf's ...

Mmm, I'll come back with a more detailed critique later, but a couple of quick things before I retire. The plot is a little too Matrix-ish for my taste. An ...

NITPICKS "If anything goes wrong make sure that sword of yours is ready." He said, indicating to his own dagger. You don't indicate 'to' something! You just indicate it. "indicating ...

Hey, all! Thanks for your great critiques and support so far. I promise I'm going to edit, add chapters, elongate, and make it much much better - all because of ...

Are you implying something here?

Do you know anything about mooching off your parents as long as you can? :)

Hey! I realize you're not exactly new anymore and you've posted quite a few topics, but...er...WELCOME ANYWAY!!! Because everone's a star, and almost everyone likes hugs. And everyone likes cookies. ...

Welcome to YWS!!! Just a hint (psst, cheat alert here, don't kill me) if you're not a fast reader and don't want to read two whole posts before posting your ...

I'm used to such senses mother" Rebecca said flatly. senses = scenes? :) I love this...not a lot to say that I already told you in the pm. :P If ...

This is really, really awesome, as always. As the previous critter said, there's not a lot to nitpick. You asked me if your charecters were far the MC is very ...

Ryley, Curtis, Dylan? Oooohh ohoh...Cody? :) Short, energetic 24-year-old woman with short red hair and green eyes. She's really into guys, and always has a new boyfriend. She has only ...

Wow...this is really good! I really enjoyed your imagery, and the way you almost made the joy so JOYFUL that it was almost painful. A lot of your imagery wasn't ...

BRRIINNNGGG!!! My cell phone rang in the middle of my high school history class I was so embarrassed, the guy I liked started snickering, with brown hair and bright dreamy ...

I'm not absolutely sure, but somehow I imagine that I'd be...made of brick. And built like a wall. Yeah. *sarcastically*~ Penelope Eros I'd be tall, and dark, and handsome - ...

BBB, I'M itching for a NaNoWriMo...I'm on spring vacation, and I'm working on a new novel, so inspiration to work FAST would be cool! ~MademoiselleKool P.S. Is it okay if ...