sokool15

Humongous. I know it's a real word and it's legitimate to use in serious writing, but I've heard it said by little children WAY too much when they're describing things..."Sarah, ...

Hmph, can't figure out how to do a spoiler. No, you weren't even close, except with the height. short, black hair and dark brown eyes?

A happy girl who's fun to be around...appearances aren't important but I'll play into them anyway. Maybe average to tall height, dark hair, tanned skin, green eyes?

*gasp* I absolutely adore this piece!!! Your characters are unique and your writing style is engaging and interesting. I love the fact that your main characters so far (Gaven) have ...

Hi, there! First of all I'd like to say that this piece had a really sweet, sad and simple feel to it with beautiful imagery. A perfect bit for a ...

All he ever wanted to do was write a novel that somebody, somewhere would want to read. he pursued this dream quietly, in his basement, and it was coming along ...

Wow. I must say, because of certain...er...people in my life, I haven't been encouraged to read much fantasy - particularly in the form of werewolves and vampires. But YOU, my ...

Hmmm...I'm not sure this was exactly the place to post this - but I'm no mod, so it's not my place. However, about the post itself - it definitely sounds ...

Hi, there! First of all I just want to say that this is a very good idea for a story - it has a lot of potential for excellence and ...

Derik stood outside Penelope's door, hesitating. He didn't want to wake her up, but he did want to see how she was. He listened at the door for a moment ...

"Hell no!" Brad yelled, "No offense." He said to Aaron. Arron shrugged, "Non taken." Arron = Aaron Non = None Comma after "Hell" --- A pretty good chapter, in all! ...

Hey, thanks all so much for reading! I wanted to show what was going on back at home, but if you don't like it I'll understand. Let me know what ...

9/10 beautiful but sad. :cry:

Are you implying that I'm being hostile? :P

Lol, "hate mail!" You are a coward and you stinketh like a pig. lol! Hilarious. I do agree that you could have split it up into longer bits, but I'm ...