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"Come on, Sarah. We don't have much time," Marie prodded my side. I was sitting on the white exam table, trying to collect my thoughts and make some sense, some ...

If readers could answer these helpful questions in a critique, I'd be eternally grateful! 1. Is it too long for just one chapter/post? 2. Did I introduce the dragon too ...

Thanks so much all who critiqued my first chapter! This one's a little shorter, sort of an in between actions chapter to get in touch with the charecter's true thoughts ...

Um, I haven't got any critiquing questions this time. Just tell me what you really think. I can bear it! *braces self* Have fun! Chapter 3 Penelope opened the door ...

Eek! I think this one's a little long...if I need to I can split it into two posts, just let me know.Questions1. Is the switching view awkward? It's been all ...

Hey, all! Thanks for your great critiques and support so far. I promise I'm going to edit, add chapters, elongate, and make it much much better - all because of ...

Hey, thanks all so much for reading! I wanted to show what was going on back at home, but if you don't like it I'll understand. Let me know what ...

Derik stood outside Penelope's door, hesitating. He didn't want to wake her up, but he did want to see how she was. He listened at the door for a moment ...