sofi

i loved this. some of the images you used were amazing, i wish i could write something as good. they really seemed to capture the moment they were describing perfectly. ...

the two pieces of yours which ive read both have a lot of dialogue, and like i said about your other one i dont usually like things which are like ...

i liked this alot. i thought the fact that it was predominantly written in dialogue is what made it effective. usually im not a huge fan of things with a ...

i think i might just be being picky with this but in the line: 'When I was younger, I used to watch those ducks swimming on the water and ducking ...

I loved your idea for this and i think it has a lot of potential. a lot of this is my personal response and opinion of your piece so obviously ...

I thought this was fantastic. I loved your descriptions like (i dont know how to make it a quote): 'I hear laughs from the crowd, and I can feel my ...