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Hey Sarah! Since I am a very firm fan of yours I would love if you could possibly review my piece and bestow some of your brilliance upon it :D ...

It's called 'Watching Mermaids' (just incase I pasted the wrong link!) and it would be great if you would review it, it hasn't had many! Please take your time though ...

Hey scasha! Thank you so much for reviewing this, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D What you edited sounds so much better so thank you! And have a good christmas ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS!! :D It's lovely to have someone new joining us! This place is really great if you love to write. Do you write any particular genre? ...

Hello! Well Nutty seems to have given you a pretty thorough introduction to the site :D so I'm just here to say welcome and feel free to PM me with ...

It’s supposed to be a bright day, the day she arrives back at Port Maddock. The forecast has predicted the whole week to be sunny and Emily imagines it to ...

Hey! And welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here :D Everyone else has really covered any information you might need to know so I just thought I would ...

Hello! I do agree that you should expand on this slightly. I found it very interesting as it is and it definatly made me think, but I also think that ...

If that's the kind of character you want to portray then I don't think it's a problem. People should know, and especially us, as writers, that your characters feelings and ...

I looked down at my own shorts and tried to pull them down more so the back of my legs wouldn’t stick to the seat. Whoever invented short shorts obviously ...

Hello there! I edited a few things as i went through if that's okay! :D Chapter one: He was working through college You know why I’m sending you there, right ...

Hello there! Just thought I'd drop by and say welcome! Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions or want a review or anything like that! Hope ...

Hi! I was wondering if you were just posting this on it's own or if it was the opening to something much longer? If it's just on it's own then ...

Hey everyone! Thanks so much for taking the time to recommend books I really appreciate it! I think I might get him 'Reach for the Sky' but I'll definatly recommend ...

It's funny you should mention that one because that's the one I was going to get him but then someone told me that he already read it :( Thank you ...