sofi

i think i might just be being picky with this but in the line: 'When I was younger, I used to watch those ducks swimming on the water and ducking ...

I loved your idea for this and i think it has a lot of potential. a lot of this is my personal response and opinion of your piece so obviously ...

I thought this was fantastic. I loved your descriptions like (i dont know how to make it a quote): 'I hear laughs from the crowd, and I can feel my ...