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thank you all for the critiques! when i actually wrote this it wasnt intended to be an abstract piece it just sort of ended up that way but i think ...

hi ProfessorRabbit and Faith :D I mainly write fiction. ive tried writing fantasy and things like that a few times and failed miserably! and i always do things like write ...

I read How I Live Now by Meg Rosoff and i loved it. i was thinking about ordering some of her other books off amazon or something like 'Just In ...

Hey :D um well i guess im not really that new to the site, i joined just over a week ago and i never really introduced myself i guess so ...

overall, i really liked the idea of this, but there were a few things which i noticed. i think a lot of it is just me being picky though. There ...

i really like the way you ended this. Most stories that ive read like this one end in a really over-done cliched way so i was pleasantly surprised by this ...

i really liked this. i would like to give you an amazing constructive critique like you did for me but the only thing which i would have changed (just in ...

i have to say i started reading these books and didnt like them at all, but that was about 4 years ago so since you all love them i might ...

i loved this. some of the images you used were amazing, i wish i could write something as good. they really seemed to capture the moment they were describing perfectly. ...

if you could have a look at this one that would be good :) if you have the time..which you do seem to so... thanks :)

the two pieces of yours which ive read both have a lot of dialogue, and like i said about your other one i dont usually like things which are like ...

i liked this alot. i thought the fact that it was predominantly written in dialogue is what made it effective. usually im not a huge fan of things with a ...

[s]hey, i have a piece which has had only one critique (it was a very good one but id like a few more :) ) title: chasing rainbows genre: other ...

i dont think the fact that it has passed though human hands necessarily makes it corrupt unless it was written directly by humans, which some people believe it was. but ...

(it's still a little rough and needs some cleaning up so please be harsh! This piece is quite important to me so I'd really appreciate advice with it. thanks!) You’re ...