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Re: I Need Some Help!
So basically, since we moved into this new house over a year ago I've been waiting to redecorate my room and I've finally got round to it (YAY!) On one ...
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: Shuffle That Playlist!
oooh the Klaxons and Kings of Leon. I'm impressed :) I'd give it 9/10 because I love Maroon 5 as well :) 1. Patience - Take That 2. Everybody knows ...
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: I'm an oldie... seriously!
Hey there Jesooz! :D How do you like YWS so far? I've been on a few other sites as well, and I really think this one is the best! I'm ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Cade: I actually really liked The Other Boleyn Girl. I thought it was very interesting, I enjoyed it a lot. I quite like historical stuff. I'm a bit of a ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: One more new person
Hey jones! Welcome to YWS! I just critiqued one of your pieces! It was very good. I did notice that you haven't yet critiqued any works yet, and you should ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: The Narrow Path
Hey jones! I really liked your subject matter here. I loved the way you had the pathway to heaven (I'm assuming heaven) as uneven in contrast to the other smooth ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Cauliflower and Hand Grenades
Hey Angel Of Death! I liked this a lot. I loved the subject matter and thought you did very well with portraying his Ayal's character. I also like the way ...
Aug 23, 2008 -
Re: No Religion In the Bar Fellas
I think there are definatly ways to politly discuss religion. If you express a genuine interest to know about someone else religion without being upfront and challenging it and listening ...
Aug 23, 2008 -
Re: Exam Results
Hmm well i guess you just need to look into it properly and in the end something will jump out at some uni that will just make you think 'this ...
Aug 21, 2008 -
Re: Exam Results
I just got my GCSE results over e-mail :D (since no-one's ever in dubai over the summer I don;t get the pleasure of going to into school to collect my ...
Aug 21, 2008 -
Re: love
You should have reviewed two other works before posting your own- it makes sure everyone gets reviews and it makes people more willing to review your work. Secondly- I have ...
Aug 21, 2008 -
Re: Pieces of Cloud
Ok i know we're supposed to give constructive critiques but, wow... This was really really great I couldn't find anything at all to critique. I love your last line. It ...
Aug 21, 2008 -
Re: Yo
Hey Alex! You're right this site is great for inspiring people. What kind of things do you like to write? The only thing you should really remember is that for ...
Aug 21, 2008 -
Re: Exam Results
Hmm I wouldn't call GCSE's easy, or maye I'm just not as smart as the rest of you! I thought that they gave you a bit too much work for ...
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: Evil, are we born with it?
And there's an infinate amount of reasons that it could arise. And it can be tiny things. Think about things like domestic violence: it happens a lot. You're always hearing ...
Aug 16, 2008
