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Alright, listen just because I'm not experienced in poems, doesn't mean that I'm a dumbass and don't know a thing. I have reviewed poems before, I was just saying that ...

Junglelover your kitty is so cute!! The pictures are a little big, but they aren't terribly big so it's okay. My favorite is the third one(: I think if you ...

Hello CardDragon! I'm just cautioning you, I'm not one to write lyrics or poetry, so essentially I'm not the best reviewer. But I'm gonna give it a try! I'm not ...

Hello Attolia! Yes, this did make me laugh, but I wasn't laughing at you! lol, I thought this was cute, so much poetry is depressing and intense, but this was ...

Hey Smexaykk01! I agree with blackbird12, I think your piece is very rushed. I'm guessing you wrote this while you were upset with your dad for yelling at you (believe ...

Hello blackbird12! This is an excellent story. Very well written, I really don't have much to say about the grammar, except for the fact that sometimes I didn't understand what ...

It was Independence Day weekend and Veronica brought me along to her campground with her family. Now when she had told me camping, I thought she had a camper or ...

Hey LittlePrincess! This is my second time reviewing one of your chapters for My Falling Sun and it always is interesting everytime. I see that the plot has thickened even ...

Hello Nike! I know this is part of a series, so I don't expect to understand much about the characters and what they are about because I did not read ...

Hello Lumierre! I love this poem! I think it's beautifully written, I don't recommend changing it in the least bit. I love the struggle there is between God and Lucifer! ...

Hello Naydy! Well, I think you definately have some grammar to look at. This story was filled with little things I could nitpick on, but I'll only include a few: ...

Hello Flit! I have to say, this was a refreshing love story. What I mean is that this story was just so adorable! With all the childhood aspects and the ...

Hello winterbaby! When I started reading this, when I saw Holden Caulfield, I immediately knew he was from a book. I believe it's Catcher In The Rye? I'm not sure, ...

Hello SlyNightOwl! I liked this story, it's unique. Nowadays I see too many stories about vampires and other creatures, but Demons is a first. Anyways, I have a few grammar ...

Hello EmmVeePi! You have a good idea for this story, but I think you should edit your transitions more. For example: Picking the bag up off the counter I lead ...