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Welcome to YWS, Joana! I love the state of Maine! My family and I go vacationing up there later in the summer, it's so beautiful. Do you ever just lay ...

Hey LibbyLovesDrums! You asked for a review, so here I am! There's potential in your writings, but you need more to it. Your sentences are simple and short, try combining ...

Hey Hibiscus! I loved your poem(: My favorite part was the ending, it was cute in a sadistic way! This world sounds promising, I wish I could live there. There's ...

Hey RazHuni! I like your piece! But if you want to pull off a story like this, bring out the emotion! Pile it on there, show the readers how heartwrenched ...

Hey Sierra! I'll start off like everyone else did, I love The Killers!(: I think it's awesome that the song moved you so much to write a story based off ...

Hey ladymask! I really liked this! At first I didn't like that you were writing as if I was the character, but at the end with the psychological tricks it ...

Hey romance otaku! Wonderful job on this! You have an amazing plot line behind this, I've never heard of anything close to an "arterers" so two thumbs up for originality. ...

Hey MitsuSora! Welcome to YWS! (: I hope you enjoy this website, it truly is an amazing writing website, especially for feedback. With that being said, I'm here to give ...

Oh gosh, problems seem to be brewing in Sesame Street! Damn that Abby Cadabby, she's not even from the original cast of sesame street, I would feel insulted if I ...

Hey Klpidnc12! I'm SodapopLunchbox and I would like to welcome to YWS! I hope your enjoying this website as much as the rest of us do. Anyways, on with your ...

hey smashles! I loved your poem, it's got a good rhyming scheme and it's an awesome poem that you "just wrote on the spot!" I really don't have much to ...

hey MyStoryline! Well if this doesn't tug on your heartstrings, I don't know what will. It's very upsetting when a young life is swept out from underneath them, I think ...

hey TheEnigma! Oh man, I think I loved this. No wait, I don't think I loved this, I definitely did. We all know that the TV characters we grew up ...

Hey Chryssa2305! Let me welcome you to YWS! This is a really awesome website(: Anyways, onwards to your review This piece is nice, I find myself telling people all the ...

Hey meggwriting! I loved this(: Welcome to YWS! I only have one thing to point out here that struck me as odd. I want to forget every name, Move on ...