sodapoplunchbox

Hey RedRaven! I haven't read any other chapters of your story, so I'm just reviewing based on this chapter, not on character developments or anything like that. You've peaked my ...

Hey Warrior Princess! I must applaud you on your bravery, if this is a true story like you said it is, then I know how hard it is to fight ...

Hello bluewaterlily! (awesome username btw) I love the passion behind your poem. I hear you about the best friend betraying you, I'm dealing with a similar situation myself right now. ...

Hey silentpages! Excellent story here! I'm sure that if the winners were based on the quality of writing, you would still have won. Congrats to you! I love the plot ...

Hey retrodisco666! I like this story (: it was cute! I could connect with the main character because I too have fallen in love with someone whom I don't know, ...

Yay! Cookie Monster is in this one! Yet again, this never ceases to make me laugh. But in a good way(:

Hey White Rabbit! You write very well, even if it is "on a whim" like you said. I loved your poem, it's a different take on the world! And different ...

Hey ladymask! I agree with the other reviewers, you did too much telling in this story. Don't get me wrong, you have a good thing going for you here, but ...

Hey Mockingbird1990! Welcome to YWS! I think I can help with your problem about this story's lack of a name. Here are a few suggestions: -Personal Demons (this would go ...

Hey ziggiefred! You asked for it, so here I am with your review :) The plot is pretty straight forward, the mother leaves the stepfather only to find out he ...

Hey Fantasyfreak14! Amazing story you have here! It's definitely a unique piece. I really don't have any constructive criticism to say here. I didn't like Elena at first, but at ...

Hey Solvalery! You have a few grammar mistakes in here, if you reread this outloud I'll bet that you can find most of them. But I'll point some of them ...

Hey nenc123! I hope you didn't write this because you were mad at someone, I'd be scared! lol, I'm just kidding(: The plot was solid, I really don't have much ...

Hey Stephaniez08! Welcome to YWS! I'm going to be straight with you, this piece is not very original. I've seen this plot line plenty of times and everything lacks individuality. ...

Hello everyone! My name is Meaghan and I am... SodapopLunchbox! What's my username mean? Sodapop - I love the sound of that word. Everytime I say it my mouth feels ...